Longtime Bosom Buddies

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two good longtime bosom buddies
puerile teasing games they play
they're inseparable toddies
they're different from night and day

puerile teasing games they play
ooh, ooh, eee, eee, aah, aah
they're different from night and day
arf, arf , dog object to its tah...

ooh, ooh, eee, eee, aah, aah
high-speed monkey pulls his friends tail 
arf, arf , dog object to its tah…
feuds erupt, and calm still prevail

high-speed monkey pulls his friends tail 
they're inseparable toddies
feuds erupt, and calm still prevail
two good longtime bosom buddies

5/6/2020

fun musing, no one has used the photo 3 for the contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 5/18/2020 9:36:00 PM
Both your poem and video are delightful Eve. I have never attempted to write one of these but will try. I love the photos you have chosen for your contest! xxoo
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Date: 5/10/2020 6:11:00 PM
Eve, really amusing & Interesting. I like this style of poetry where there is repetition of lines. Will try to attempt. Rgds. Mohan
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Date: 5/6/2020 9:38:00 AM
Haha good one Eve, love the video too Tom
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Date: 5/6/2020 6:27:00 AM
This is hilarious! So much fun! Love the video too!
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Date: 5/6/2020 3:07:00 AM
This is very amusing and tells us that we can get on even if we are very different. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 5/6/2020 2:11:00 AM
What a fun poem and image - shame you can't enter your own poem in the contest - I recall someone who used to do it in the past using bogus account names!!:-) hugs Jan xx
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