Longtime Bosom Buddies

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two good longtime bosom buddies puerile teasing games they play they're inseparable toddies they're different from night and day puerile teasing games they play ooh, ooh, eee, eee, aah, aah they're different from night and day arf, arf , dog object to its tah... ooh, ooh, eee, eee, aah, aah high-speed monkey pulls his friends tail arf, arf , dog object to its tah… feuds erupt, and calm still prevail high-speed monkey pulls his friends tail they're inseparable toddies feuds erupt, and calm still prevail two good longtime bosom buddies 5/6/2020 fun musing, no one has used the photo 3 for the contest

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/18/2020 9:36:00 PM

Both your poem and video are delightful Eve. I have never attempted to write one of these but will try. I love the photos you have chosen for your contest! xxoo

Mohan Chutani

Date: 5/10/2020 6:11:00 PM

Eve, really amusing & Interesting. I like this style of poetry where there is repetition of lines. Will try to attempt. Rgds. Mohan

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/6/2020 9:38:00 AM

Haha good one Eve, love the video too Tom

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/6/2020 6:27:00 AM

This is hilarious! So much fun! Love the video too!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 5/6/2020 3:07:00 AM

This is very amusing and tells us that we can get on even if we are very different. Kind wishes, Kai

Jan Allison

Date: 5/6/2020 2:11:00 AM

What a fun poem and image - shame you can't enter your own poem in the contest - I recall someone who used to do it in the past using bogus account names!!:-) hugs Jan xx