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Longing to go to Africa Babe I know this is spontaneous and we're just coming off a good food fight but listen, not to the paradox, let's go to Africa. Wouldn't that be a poke in the night, a dip in the Nile, a sweet roll in the oven, a swing in the jungle? Listen babe ... think babe of all the fun ... we'll be having. You'll see, I promise. We'll leave the hotel occasionally and when we do let's ... let's please see the safaris and rivers. You must promise ... and to let me ride a tiger, deal? Good. I must ride a tiger. We'll do the Serengeti, I heard that's the beast, home of the tigers ... for brave tiger riders like me ... hence I'll be your hero. Can you see the cameras clicking on us? We'll be quite the item and get this, babe we'll get you up there on an elephant. Doesn't that sound exciting? I can see us now in matching khakis and bandannas, hair breezing in the wind, out there on the grasslands with the blue wildebeests, gazelles, zebras, riding in tandem under the African sunflower, baking our busybody. ... And get this babe we'll be bonding that's the main thing, us catching jungle fever, swinging from tree to tree, branch to branch, uncorking champagne under starlight. ... And I would love to see you smile longer than the Tanzania and happy like a giraffe, longing to go, longing to go to Africa. 4/18/17 10 placements-nothing again. A person can write so indigenous to the topic, paint it vivid with color ... fun, humor, excitement, and I'll even go so far as to say, more so than others-and the results, yes the results ... sniff of crap again.

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