Longing For You

I longed for you to know Him
oh dear one of my heart
to seek true faith and turn from sin
and never once depart. 

Now you are gone and I let go
of prayers for your salvation 
into God’s hands, He surely knows 
my longing to see you in heaven. 

I long to see your face the most
your warm blue eyes and steady smile 
your humor and your antidotes 
your stories and adventures, wild. 

I longed to see your sweet heart melt
to believe, and knew you saw a glimpse
of God’s great love and kindness felt
I long to see you in His realm exist.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Mcconnell Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 7:24 AM
Such an endearing touching piece Laura, with such good imagery and with insightful thought and good expression too. Blessings always,Gordon
Leiser Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 11:41 AM
Thank you, Gordon! :)
Eslinger Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 7:24 PM
A very touching, deeply moving poem for me. Check your Sp Mail. Your love of language and writing is very evident. It will be an honor getting to know you and your work, Sally’s x56
Leiser Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 8:12 PM
Thank you, Sally. I appreciate your kind comments! :)
Valles Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 4:48 PM
Beautiful poem. I know the kind of longing that you so clearly described. Praying for your peace and the comfort my friend.
Leiser Avatar
August 3, 2023 at 4:34 PM
Thank you, Tom. I do hope my uncle accepted Christ before he passed.
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