Notes About The Poem

This one comes with a nod to Gordon Lightfoot and Bob Dylan. 
With the tune of Oh My Sweet Carolina by Ryan Adams humming in the back of my mind. Penned in August of 21.

“Longing For Early Morning Rain” 

Longing For the Early Morning Rain

I’m longing, 
For the early morning rain.
The heat of summer,
Is driving me insane.
The days are long and hot, 
I wonder why I even came. 
I’m just longing,
For the early morning rain. 
.
I never dreamed 
That I’d still be living this long.
Endless parade of memories,
From past faces come and gone.
I wandered in from out of nowhere,
Didn’t plan on staying long.
Sure thought I knew just what I knew,
But I sure might just be wrong. 
.
So I’m still longing
For the early morning rain.
The heat of summer,
Is driving me insane.
The days are long and hot, 
I wonder why I even came. 
I’m just longing,
For the early morning rain. 
.

I’m walking down this trail of memories,
Hoping for that old familiar breeze.
The shadows and the shade,
From that long forgotten tree, 
Recall the things that seemed to matter,
The things that used to be. 
So
I’m longing
For the early morning rain.
The heat of summer,
Is driving me insane.
The days are long and hot, 
I wonder why I even came. 
I’m just longing,
For the early morning rain. 
.
I want to dance in the rain,
I want to feel young once again.
Wish I could right my youthful wrongs from way back when.
But I get no second chances,
I’m just wishing in the wind,
For the early morning rain to come again.
.

I’m just  longing
For the early morning rain.
The heat of summer,
Is driving me insane.
The days are long and hot, 
I wonder why I even came. 
I’m just longing,
For the early morning rain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Mcconnell Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 11:09 AM
Great penning Kelly, shows nice rhyme and flow throughout along with good imagery too. Blessings,Gordon
Cunningham Avatar
August 31, 2021 at 1:05 PM
Well written Kelly, you've penned great lyrics for a song.. Tom
Crenshaw Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 10:34 AM
Thank you!
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