Eve Roper Poet Rhyme

Longing For My Spouse

We both care that matters, you were made for me,
evidently you were meant for me.
Love persists to manifest
While at the same blessed,
till heaven.
Spouse.
I'm driven
with my longing tears
pray for closure of long years.
A prey as feathers picked off, death fret,
silent longing, scared bird, tangled in a net. 



1/18/2023

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Sara Kendrick February 5, 2023 at 11:59 PM Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara

Constance La France February 4, 2023 at 7:25 AM Eve, congratulations on your Honorable Mention in my Writing Challenge, Andaree form, Constance

Kathy Bahr January 21, 2023 at 6:23 PM Nice form really neat. Thank you for sharing.

Jack Horne January 21, 2023 at 7:00 AM beautiful heartfelt write here,my friend

Mystic Rose Rose January 20, 2023 at 5:48 PM so beautifully penned I can feel the longing in your heart Eve, I am sure he is up there watching you with loving eyes, always, gl

Sotto Poet January 19, 2023 at 5:46 AM Excellent work, Eve. A poem with strong construction. Best of luck to you in the contest!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 19, 2023 at 2:44 AM - Lovely poem, Eve :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar January 18, 2023 at 10:55 PM Well done, dear Eve. A well-constructed poem. I have no ideas for this contest at the moment. My muse demands free verse.