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Longing For My Spouse

We both care that matters, you were made for me, evidently you were meant for me. Love persists to manifest While at the same blessed, till heaven. Spouse. I'm driven with my longing tears pray for closure of long years. A prey as feathers picked off, death fret, silent longing, scared bird, tangled in a net. 1/18/2023

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Date: 2/5/2023 11:59:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 2/4/2023 7:25:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your Honorable Mention in my Writing Challenge, Andaree form, Constance
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Date: 1/21/2023 6:23:00 PM
Nice form really neat. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 1/21/2023 7:00:00 AM
beautiful heartfelt write here,my friend
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Date: 1/20/2023 5:48:00 PM
so beautifully penned I can feel the longing in your heart Eve, I am sure he is up there watching you with loving eyes, always, gl
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Date: 1/19/2023 5:46:00 AM
Excellent work, Eve. A poem with strong construction. Best of luck to you in the contest!
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Date: 1/19/2023 2:44:00 AM
- Lovely poem, Eve :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 1/18/2023 10:55:00 PM
Well done, dear Eve. A well-constructed poem. I have no ideas for this contest at the moment. My muse demands free verse.
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