Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Blank verse

- Longing and Tears -

A golden key in my hand
    Perhaps it opens the door to a secret room
    Pandora's box - seeking total freedom through love

    Will the future be controlled by the past
    Sentimental thoughts - heart grabs the soul
    A dew drop is laying like jelly and shaking

    It seemed almost impossible
    Your words lift me up
    I can climb the highest mountain

    Living present in hope and love
    The silence sinks in ... tears born of flames
    Empty thoughts sets no trace






10.05.2014
A-L Andresen :)

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Liam Mcdaid January 12, 2015 at 10:26 AM outstanding beautiful pen anne lise deep golden piece bless you pal Anne-Lise Andresen January 12, 2015 at 12:01 PM - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, my friend Liam :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock May 22, 2014 at 11:09 AM Coming in deep from the heart and soul Anne Lise. The future can be controlled by the past if we allow it too. But on the other hand it is from the past that we learn. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen May 22, 2014 at 11:17 AM - Yes, you're absolutely right dear Phyllis !! Thanks for the nice visit and comments,my friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carl Fraser May 21, 2014 at 12:33 PM Just beautiful Anne, captivating and serene, blessings Carl Anne-Lise Andresen May 21, 2014 at 12:39 PM - Carl, thanks for the kind words from you - glad you would read and comments my write. - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jessica Thompson May 21, 2014 at 12:22 PM You have such a gentle spirit, and it shows through your writing. I very much enjoyed your poem. Have wonderful day Anne-Lise Your Friend Jess :) Anne-Lise Andresen May 21, 2014 at 12:37 PM - Jess, thanks for the kind words from you - glad you would read and comments my write. - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam May 21, 2014 at 1:04 AM Spiritual write. Done it well. Enjoyed. Tfs Anne-Lise Andresen May 21, 2014 at 3:48 AM - Thanks for the nice visit - and lovely comments,my dear friend Ravi :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Hitesh Panchal May 20, 2014 at 1:39 AM wonderful Anne-Lise Andresen May 20, 2014 at 2:28 AM - Hitesh, thanks for the kind words from you - glad you would read and comments my write. - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley May 17, 2014 at 12:26 PM A truly powerful and image evoking presentation.. Deep must be the power of your heart and soul.. Bravo my friend, a huge bravo!! Anne-Lise Andresen May 17, 2014 at 12:29 PM - Robert, thanks for taking your time to read and comments my poem : - Longing And Tears - Always nice that someone like my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Keith O.J. Hunt May 17, 2014 at 8:45 AM Powerful piece Anne, vivid universal emotions through your eyes, excellent write honey! :-) Love always, Keith Anne-Lise Andresen May 17, 2014 at 8:48 AM - Keith, thanks for the kind words from you - glad you would read and comments my write. - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak May 14, 2014 at 4:56 AM As usual, your words are amazing. Just the image of holding a key and being unsure what to do with it shows great longing. Anne-Lise Andresen May 14, 2014 at 7:09 AM - Thanks for the kind words from you, Monterey - glad you would read and comments my write. - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun May 14, 2014 at 3:39 AM I enjoyed reading this wonderful heartfelt poem of yours this afternoon my dearest friend Anne Lise. Thank you so much for sharing! Have a great day! love lots and big hugs, Leonora Anne-Lise Andresen May 14, 2014 at 3:46 AM - Glad you liked my poem :)) - Thanks for visiting and your commets, dear friend Leonora. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mel Merrill May 14, 2014 at 1:29 AM A wonderfully sad and real bit of art. How well you control the emotion, but there's definitely a passion burning, and it's great to see. I'm glad I stopped by. Until you have more comments, you can count on me lol Love and hugs, my sweet...xoxo...mel Anne-Lise Andresen May 14, 2014 at 2:48 AM - Glad that you like my poem, Mel :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn May 13, 2014 at 8:52 PM ANNE LISA, I WROTE WIND MILLS FOR YOU DEAREST LADY, TAKE CARE AND GOODNIGHT, SORRY NOT FEELING WELL TONIGHT, CHERI Anne-Lise Andresen May 14, 2014 at 2:49 AM - Hope you are better today, Cherl ! - good thoughts transmitted to you :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton May 13, 2014 at 7:01 PM a pen of love Anne Lise with tinges of sadness ty or visiting my page hugs Anne-Lise Andresen May 14, 2014 at 2:53 AM - Hi Shadow, thanks for taking your time to read and comments my poem : - Longing And Tears - Always nice that someone read my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Justin Bordner May 13, 2014 at 4:30 PM This is my favorite poem from you to date Anne! You give such beautiful form to the extremes of feelings and dreams. J.A.B. Anne-Lise Andresen May 14, 2014 at 2:57 AM - Thanks for the kind words from you, Justin - glad you would read and comments my write. - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Mason May 13, 2014 at 3:46 PM very spiritual! not easy to put into words but you did it :) Warm thoughts, Ralph Anne-Lise Andresen May 14, 2014 at 2:59 AM - Sometimes words come by themselves ...... - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Ralph. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud May 13, 2014 at 11:43 AM i wish you miles of smiles. dear anne.. have a fine day!.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen May 13, 2014 at 12:07 PM :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) // huggs !!

Sam Raj May 13, 2014 at 10:11 AM Pretty inspiring and emotional. Lovely write. Thanks for sharing Anne-Lise Andresen May 13, 2014 at 12:06 PM - Glad that you like my poem, Sam :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn May 12, 2014 at 3:25 PM Anne Lise, I've written something just for you today, I hope you enjoy it, It's a thank you for all the beautiful visions you've written for me and others, your soft form of poetry is truly inspirational, I hope this tribute will do your work justice. cheri Anne-Lise Andresen May 13, 2014 at 1:33 AM - I'm not sure which poem you wanted me to read "just for you" :) - Thanks for visiting and your commets Cherl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Deborah Shiells May 12, 2014 at 3:04 PM Hi Anne Lise, This is a very discriptive write, the words expressed here are elegant and honest. Loved it:-) Thank you for sharing this write with us here. Peace, Deborah Anne-Lise Andresen May 13, 2014 at 1:37 AM - Nice that you like my poem - Your visits and comments make me happy - thank you, Deborah :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos May 12, 2014 at 1:07 PM I love this poem as it is introspective - questioning and searching for answers while hoping! Well done! Anne-Lise Andresen May 12, 2014 at 1:10 PM - Thanks for visiting and your commets Pandita. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud May 12, 2014 at 11:09 AM hope this is not your mood, nonetheless , a splendid write.. dropping by to send my hello, anne.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen May 12, 2014 at 11:32 AM - it is not my mood, dear Nette :))) - huggs ;)

Jake Ponce May 12, 2014 at 4:10 AM Hello, Anne-Lise. I felt uneasy and had a sense of longing after I read this kind of sad yet beutifully written poem. Anne-Lise Andresen May 12, 2014 at 6:00 AM - Jake, thanks for taking your time to read and comments my poem : - Longing And Tears - Always nice that someone read my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich May 12, 2014 at 12:09 AM a sad one, Anne. Nice poem and I hope you had a marvelous mother's day Anne-Lise Andresen May 12, 2014 at 2:15 AM - No Mother's Day - it's in February in Norway, Andrea :) - Thanks for visiting and your commets. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn May 11, 2014 at 7:34 PM Lovely work and very interesting, well written and it leaves one with alot to think about, thanks for sharing it with me tonight, happy mother's day glad you enjoyed my always a princess write. cheri Anne-Lise Andresen May 12, 2014 at 2:17 AM - No Mother's Day - it's in February in Norway, Cherl :) - Glad you liked my poem. - Thanks for visiting and your commets. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick May 11, 2014 at 3:48 PM Interesting work that you have penned in this work..Many walk around with the past strapped to their backs inhibiting them from living in the present..Enjoyed reading.. Thanks for the visit to my page..And thanks for the Mother's Day greeting..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen May 11, 2014 at 3:54 PM - Yes, it's really true Sara. - Thanks for visiting and your commets. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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