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Longing

I never meant to break your heart with my silly jest The broken pieces, I pick up and clean I ask God is this were a test And then I remember that I'm only a teen Yet I long to be seen

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Skat A

Date: 6/30/2015 10:53:00 PM

John Congrats, this is a sweet win. Love **SKAT**

John Monteblanco
Date: 7/1/2015 9:08:00 AM

Thanks a lot!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/30/2015 10:54:00 AM

I am delighted that you entered my contest. All the entries were uniquely written and of good quality. I read your wonderful work and found it to be superb. Congrats on your win …Sara

John Monteblanco
Date: 7/1/2015 9:11:00 AM

Thank you! Entering your contest was a blast because I'm not really doing anything this summer and I'm looking to enter as many contests as possible!