Longing

Longing
Her body
To make love 
A heavenly pure bliss
Craving

Longing
Her heart
To love forever
In sickness and health
Eager
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 6:55 AM
A romantic longing, beautifully written...congrats on your first place win! Hugs, Rhonda
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January 2, 2015 at 11:13 PM
Nehpets,, Congratulations! :) A very deep "Longing, WIN." Always~ Linda
Gorelick Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 4:28 PM
Wow! First place, congrats. BG
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 1:55 PM
Congrats for your win!
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 11:23 AM
love your take on the theme - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Kayode Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 2:54 AM
It is a winning year, congrats Nehpets ...huggs
Mehta Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 9:26 PM
Wish you all the best of 2015. Congrats on your win in my contest, Nehpets
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