Kim Van Breda Poet Rhyme

Longing

LONGING

could you be the one to understand unspoken 
words
the ones my heart holds silently undeclared
deferred

could you possibly discern passionate thoughts and
emotions
the ones my mind holds onto in preconceived
notions

could you see through eyes of fragmented perception
deep
the ones I encounter along life’s journey and
keep

could you listen and hear all  things I attempt to
explain
the ones I expose when lost and vulnerable to
pain


could you fulfil the LONGING in my 
soul
to be understood HEALED complete and 
whole

could you?

  
© Kim van Breda—February 2014

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Bl Devnath March 2, 2014 at 1:57 PM Excellent poem read now. Really beautiful it's. Loved always, my friend, bl

Leon Wilson March 2, 2014 at 9:56 AM I could,nt but I know but I know some one who can is name is Jesus nice poem Kim God bless.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2014 at 7:36 AM - Kim, so beautiful and soft written :) - A pleasure to read your words. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chuck Melugin February 25, 2014 at 8:08 AM Dear Kim Wonderful write! 7 Questions of delicate desires of the heart. my best, chuck

Tim Smith February 21, 2014 at 5:13 PM I absolutely adore this Kim...It is perfect....Tim

Andrea Dietrich February 18, 2014 at 4:04 PM You have a flair with this type of poetry. VEry nice, dear!!

Tim Ryerson February 18, 2014 at 3:04 AM I absolutely LOVE this Kim, especially the repetition of 'could you' to start each verse and then turning it into a question at the end. WOW...To me, this is the perfect description of the longing for a true soul mate....How have you been my friend? - Tim

Joseph May February 17, 2014 at 12:20 PM Very nice write with an interesting message...I enjoyed the read

David Williams February 17, 2014 at 11:41 AM Hi Kim, nice to see you back, I like the message in this and love the format as well, good flow, you still sending work to Mark? David

Darren Watson February 17, 2014 at 10:43 AM To walk together without a word . Words not spoken but plainly heard . Just hold my hand and feel the electricity. Then allow your heart to talk to me . Lovely poem Kym . Thank you for sharing .