Longing

You turn around and expect to see me there.
But no longer do I belong to you.
I'm free now to see the world.
I'm  happy to be free, but I still find you there waiting on me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Magesword  Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 2:01 PM
Thanks for the positive feedback.
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February 19, 2014 at 2:04 PM
Also check out some of my other poems to please.
Bolton Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 3:19 PM
Here's hoping he merely waits and doesn't turn into a stalker.
Bolton Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 3:19 PM
I meant she instead of he, sorry.
Rogers Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 9:56 AM
former love is like a shadow of one's past. nice work. Robert
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