Longing

WANTING, ALWAYS WANTING... A SMILE ON HER LIPS, FALL AIR CRISP AND COOL, A DANCING FIRE ON A COLD DAY'S NIGHT, A PAT ON THE BACK, A WHISTLE IN THE DARK, A CHANCE TO SEE GOD IN LOVE'S LONELY HEART.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/12/2019 6:42:00 PM

Congrats on your win, LJ. A beautiful poem.

L. J. Carber
Date: 3/13/2019 9:59:00 AM

Thanks Line!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/12/2019 3:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, L.J. .. hugs Eve ~`*

L. J. Carber
Date: 3/12/2019 3:55:00 PM

Thanks Eve, much appreciated !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2016 7:10:00 PM

wow, what a great little poem this is, Len. BIG congrats on a wonderful win.

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/1/2016 8:18:00 AM

Excellent Len, congratulations...

L. J. Carber
Date: 10/1/2016 11:43:00 AM

Thanks, Charlie-- I appreciate it

Lu Loo

Date: 9/30/2016 12:56:00 PM

len, sadly beautiful...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

L. J. Carber
Date: 10/1/2016 11:44:00 AM

Thank you, Laura

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2014 8:55:00 PM

your wants are so simple and so nice. Congrats. I really enjoyed reading this one.

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 3/5/2014 1:53:00 PM

lovely write! Congrats on the win!!!

Monterey Sirak

Date: 3/5/2014 7:31:00 AM

simply lovely. Congrats on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2014 7:10:00 AM

- Hello Len, congratulations on your fine winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 3/5/2014 7:00:00 AM

Congrats on the worthy win Len.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/5/2014 5:33:00 AM

Lovely poem. Congratulations on the fine win, len