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Longing

The caress of the wind, the midnight breeze The smell of yeast when it slides thru your lips And the strings dances when it hit the tips your fingers, brings music to my ears! The night is young, but the stars shone down It smiles to the other, it showed no doubt And the fields began to light up, the shadows echoed out The music continues, it never frowned... And the night went on, it wished to never end It wished the sun would not rise, It wished to continue to send The warmth of the music... The caress of the wind... The stars had shown more light, The night comfortably receives... But the wind has blown to another field... The stars, concealed, it stands firm And the heart of the night seems to wander... How it was blinded with all the blunder? Seek thru your soul, I cannot see! Seek thru your heart, I cannot feel! The warmth, the caress, and all the light... It’s lost, all lost... and darkness embarked! Glittering stars, oh why have you gone? Now the fields seem empty, and the clatter has begun The noise, deafening. It pierced thy heart The heart, regretting. Not unscathed... Left scarred... And yet, still, it was longing...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/16/2010 8:43:00 PM
Very nice i really enjoyed reading this ..........xoxo
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Date: 8/5/2010 7:54:00 AM
HI NINA ! THE POEMS EXPRESSES THE LONGING AND YEARNING VERY WELL ! You may like my "Timeless Longings" ! Thanks - Raj
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Date: 8/4/2010 10:42:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup . Wishing you the best in your writing Ninaendeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2010 5:56:00 AM
A beautiful write. Welcome to the Soup.
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Date: 8/3/2010 10:22:00 PM
Welcome! That is a great write. Can't wait to read more of your material. Have a great day! Scarlett
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Date: 8/3/2010 5:16:00 PM
Wow excellent poem. Welcome to the soup
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Date: 8/3/2010 4:04:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup... so enjoyed your creative write tonight...looking forward to many more.. with luv..
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