Longing


I long for the place I used to be
That felt like home, serenity
Where colored skies hugged the hill
Beauty from God's pail did spill
Where cozy woodstove fires burned,
while snowflakes fell outside
Wildlife friends didn't want to hide
The seasons brought gifts abound
I remember every sight and sound
Now, I long to return...
to a place I lost, for where I yearn

Heidi Sands

8/9/25
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 8/23/2025 11:48:00 AM
I loved this nostalgic poem! Such great descriptions, but broad enough to make them relatable.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/23/2025 2:53:00 PM
I am happy you loved this. Thank you for the kind feedback :)
Date: 8/22/2025 1:30:00 AM
- With time everything will feel better... you will make new memories and friends, Heidi :) - hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/22/2025 5:15:00 AM
Thank you Anne- Lise. Have a nice day. Hugs. :)
Date: 8/18/2025 1:26:00 AM
Pity you were blocked. I know what it means. I never blocked anyone.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/18/2025 6:20:00 AM
Hi Victor. Oh, I wasn't blocked by someone here. My writing muse has been stuck, blocked .
Date: 8/17/2025 10:16:00 PM
Such haunting nostalgia, Heidi... Here's to an unexpected discovery for you. ~ Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/18/2025 6:20:00 AM
Thank you Gershon . I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 8/13/2025 2:01:00 AM
You must write more, dear Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/13/2025 6:02:00 AM
Thank you Victor. I was blocked except for that one, but I will try :)
Date: 8/10/2025 5:25:00 PM
Holding on to the memories of the old home, A melancholy write Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/10/2025 5:27:00 PM
Yes Joseph. Thank you :)
Date: 8/10/2025 11:22:00 AM
Hello Heidi, i do not think we can go backwards in time. We have to settle for what there is now. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/11/2025 3:39:00 PM
Hello Heidi, For some of us going back in time is not a good idea. For some it is. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/10/2025 11:34:00 AM
It is true , we cant go back in time. The feelings still exist. Thank you Darlene :)
Date: 8/10/2025 3:16:00 AM
Sometimes I wish when this earth will end and we will find ourselves in a new Jerusalem. This is a sad earth.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/10/2025 4:58:00 AM
It is a sad earth in many ways Victor. Thank you for your comment :)
Date: 8/9/2025 7:47:00 PM
We always long to go back to where we lost. A touching write, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/9/2025 8:11:00 PM
Thank you Subimal. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 8/9/2025 5:28:00 PM
I have similar yearnings from time to time--almost like a homesickness (Hireth). I felt a bit nostagic as I read your words. enjoy your evening, Sara
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/9/2025 5:47:00 PM
For me, that is true. Thank you for your visit and comment Sara. I hope you enjoy your evening too :)
Date: 8/9/2025 5:14:00 PM
Sounds like a nice place!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/9/2025 5:16:00 PM
It is. It was my last home. Thank you Kim :)
Date: 8/9/2025 11:36:00 AM
Oh Heidi what an incredibly touching and beautiful poem…..it made me sad for you yearning to go back to a place that brought you some much joy and was home to you. I hope you are doing well….Debx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/9/2025 12:54:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and kind comment Deb. I hope all is well. :)
Date: 8/9/2025 10:53:00 AM
What a wonderful "Longing" write. I enjoyed reading this one. This place will return with beauty for you. Hugs... Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..................
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/9/2025 11:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Paula. I am happy you enjoyed reading it. Blessings :)
Date: 8/9/2025 10:46:00 AM
Submitted 8/9/25
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