Longing

ancient oak with hapless owl longs to shed his bark and fly into the sunniest day young and wisdom free

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Paige Hind

Date: 5/27/2024 5:38:00 PM

With age....very 'wisely' spoken, written with your years of experience....I respect you so much <3 :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/27/2024 3:37:00 AM

I did write a Dodoitsu before but I lack humor really. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/27/2024 5:42:00 AM

That is fine. No worries.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/26/2024 12:02:00 PM

A cute poem. Poor owl. He has to wait til night. This is an enjoyable vignette of nature.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/26/2024 4:38:00 PM

Thank you, Hilda!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/25/2024 4:13:00 PM

I liked your Dodoitsu, Kim...there was a bit of a comical twist at the end. Have a great evening, hugs, Sara PS I entered your contest but am not sure if I wrote something that met all the guidelines. Think it's an interesting contes. :-)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/26/2024 7:12:00 AM

Any dodoitsu will do and be considered :)

Silent One

Date: 5/25/2024 9:57:00 AM

If only you could enter your own contest... nice little dodoitsu...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/25/2024 12:36:00 PM

Thank you, Silent! :)