Longing

ancient oak with hapless owl
longs to shed his bark and fly
into the sunniest day
young and wisdom free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Hind Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 5:38 PM
With age....very 'wisely' spoken, written with your years of experience....I respect you so much <3 :)
Buhagiar Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 3:37 AM
I did write a Dodoitsu before but I lack humor really. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 5:42 AM
That is fine. No worries.
Greenhough Avatar
May 26, 2024 at 12:02 PM
A cute poem. Poor owl. He has to wait til night. This is an enjoyable vignette of nature.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2024 at 4:38 PM
Thank you, Hilda!
One Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 9:57 AM
If only you could enter your own contest... nice little dodoitsu...
Rodrigues Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 12:36 PM
Thank you, Silent! :)
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