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Longing

ancient oak with hapless owl longs to shed his bark and fly into the sunniest day young and wisdom free

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Date: 5/27/2024 5:38:00 PM
With age....very 'wisely' spoken, written with your years of experience....I respect you so much <3 :)
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Date: 5/27/2024 3:37:00 AM
I did write a Dodoitsu before but I lack humor really. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/27/2024 5:42:00 AM
That is fine. No worries.
Date: 5/26/2024 12:02:00 PM
A cute poem. Poor owl. He has to wait til night. This is an enjoyable vignette of nature.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/26/2024 4:38:00 PM
Thank you, Hilda!
Date: 5/25/2024 9:57:00 AM
If only you could enter your own contest... nice little dodoitsu...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/25/2024 12:36:00 PM
Thank you, Silent! :)

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