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Sara Kendrick's Longevity Contest

Longevity SK

I wonder fierce of twilight's call
When day closes or so it seems 
And wish that longer life be held
By sailing  journeys deeply shrined--
Lengthier be seasons, I'll  wait ,

For more dances of life...hearth's glee
My fervent hope that borrowed time,
Stretches wider than fate's design
Till last morn snuffs all heartfelt dreams.



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Paula Goldsmith June 4, 2026 at 1:51 PM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Longevity SK" write. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............

Sara Kendrick June 4, 2026 at 12:50 PM I want to say thank you for entering my contest and congratulations on being on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K.

Andrea Dietrich June 3, 2026 at 1:47 PM I repeat along with Arthur. Beautiful. And congrats

Arthur Vaso June 1, 2026 at 1:47 AM Beautiful!

Paige Hind June 1, 2026 at 1:32 AM lovely ending <3