Longevity - SK

Written: May 31, 2026, for a contest sponsored by Sara Kendrick Quote: "Longevity is not just the accumulation of shadows, but the slow, relentless design of light—where the soul learns to admire the skies." By Poet 8th place contest winner Years of silence drift in shadow’s hold, yet life’s glow cuts a furrow bold. Ascetic patience mollifies time’s tide, stringent suns succumb, shadows subside. From a thick nucleus of recall, lyric streams, etiology carved in incarnate dreams. Furious storms rage, but sagacious roots remain, visceral awe gleams through longevity’s pain. A lingering oracle, sanctuary of grace, fading walls surrender a sobbing face. Even barren sand yields to mettle’s rule, velvet dusk relieves the waning fuel. And yet the human heart, steadfast and wide, bears its banner forth—unswayed stride.
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Goldsmith Avatar
June 4, 2026 at 1:47 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Longevity SK" write/quote. Love your ending... Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............
Kendrick Avatar
June 4, 2026 at 12:48 PM
I want to say thank you for entering my contest and congratulations on being on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K.
Andresen Avatar
June 4, 2026 at 4:33 AM
- Congratulations, Las :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 1:50 PM
Congrats for your win. I also love your quote
Andresen Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 6:17 AM
- I've read that Japan has a high life expectancy ... women live the longest ... really poetically written, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
George Avatar
May 31, 2026 at 9:20 PM
"And yet the human heart, steadfast and wide, bears its banner forth—unswayed stride." Great couplet. Despite all hazards and adverse currents, we are able to hold the banner high and move forward. A very appropriate entry for the contest. All the best dear friend.
Dietrich Avatar
May 31, 2026 at 8:48 PM
Looking good for the longevity contest, Sotto. You sure have a way with complex words!
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