Longevity SK

I drifted through my days with vacant eyes, 
watched the years dissolve to useless gray. 
I never paused to marvel at the skies, 
nor cared enough to savor my days. 

I called it life, this numb and silent crawl, 
where every spark of joy was choked and slain.
I heard no beauty in the sparrow's call, 
nor felt the quiet worship of the rain.

Then sickness came — a cold and crushing thief,
a heavy clock that echoed through my soul's hall.
The striking dark brought a sudden belief:
to merely breathe is not to live at all.

I reached for all I'd failed to understand, 
for every dream I'd left to fade from view. 
But time slipped softly like forgotten sand — 
too late to grasp the world I never knew.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kendrick Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 5:29 AM
Congratulations on your work being on my winners' list. I am delighted it was there. Way to go. Yes, a major happening in our life can help to look at life with a whole new prospective. Sara K.
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May 30, 2026 at 9:51 PM
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May 30, 2026 at 9:55 PM
Good day Victoria Advanced years is what other people do. When young one wants to be at the front of the queue With many added years oe wants to be at the rear It's never too late A great poem Blessings Douglas
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May 28, 2026 at 1:28 PM
This poem presents a very vivid and haunting view of life It has perfect rhyme and near perfect meter verse 1 line 4 I would end " to savor all my days" a tiny correction otherwise a very well done poem
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