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Long Winded Drive

the cold refreshment
sweeps through the redtop mountains -
the sunny-blue wind
~   ~   ~
pleasure of rolled down windows
and grandson’s afternoon nap

1/25/2019

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Michelle Faulkner

January 26, 2019 at 3:55 PM

Love 'red-top mountains' and 'sunny-blue wind' - paints a serene picture!

Kim Rodrigues

January 26, 2019 at 6:59 PM

Thank you, Michelle!

Caren Krutsinger

January 25, 2019 at 4:44 PM

Your imagery is beautiful, would this darling grandson be strapped down like a turtle in an infant seat by chance?

Kim Rodrigues

January 25, 2019 at 4:47 PM

Shaking my head...no no no! He is four! Grandma carried the “bundle” from the car, up the stairs to the comfy couch. Trying to whisper him awake...lol!