Long Time No See

it's an invisible injury
                                 but light

                          sure can hurt

                   and for something
                                  so quiet
                                      noise

                   sure can pulverize

but it explains why you haven't 
            seen or heard from me



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Pathak Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 6:43 AM
Cutting edge humour nicely put in poetic form
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 7:33 AM
Thank you Aniruddha! A much nicer edge to be on ;) A lovely day to you! xomo
Wolf Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 11:35 PM
Gulp. ~ gw
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September 17, 2018 at 7:30 AM
Smooch ~ mo
Krutsinger Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 2:52 AM
I can envision the scariness of light and noise hurting; teeny tiny noises that bother no one else in the room have me ready to scream. I always say I have dog ears, and the children in a class are shocked when I say "That's personal, I would rather you keep it to yourself," after they have barely whispered.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 5:56 PM
That is hilarious! ;) xomo
Cunningham Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 7:29 AM
Hope the new meds work for you Maureen . Tom
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 7:33 AM
Thank you Tom <3 Not meds, brain training! And I did see a difference in one session!!! xomo :)))
Sands Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 7:21 AM
I understand completely Maureen, from having head injuries :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 7:41 AM
Thank you Heidi! I just had my first Neurofeedback training session yesterday. After which I stepped out into rush hour with a bus pulling up in full screaming squeal and I just thought "wow, that's loud"- then it dawns on me what's weird, I'm not hitting the deck covering my ears as have been the last several years. (!!!) xomo <3
Leffanta Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 8:58 PM
Well done! That describes exactly how I felt moving from Fort Apache Indian Reservation to Honolulu! Aloha! Rico
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 7:42 AM
I love when a poem does that <3 Thank you Rico!!! xomo
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