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Long Time, No See

Here's a lighter bro Spark up that home grown Smoke going up ashes going down This Indica ain't from around town And I haven't seen you in a while Since you moved down town Hey, your wife wants you to settle down But why does she always frown Whenever I visit? Is it because I get your flat really cloudy Smoking up ounces? Is it because I get your flat really dirty Coz I'm clumsy with the ashes?

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Date: 1/16/2019 5:04:00 AM
ashes after ashes, circling-whirling-evaporating, less to shape to shapeless, its long, long march from unseen to seen to unseen...///
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Date: 1/13/2019 8:43:00 AM
Superb Personification :)
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