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Long Since Forgotten Now

An aged pilgrim prostrating at the steps of Potola Palace, to her piety I bow My feelings long since forgotten now A coroner speaks beside an unzipped body bag talks of my sister's suicide with furrowed brow My sorrows long since forgotten now To the beggar man at the Colosseum missing half his face, I make a giving vow My hopes long since forgotten now A lovely young lady infatuates me she strikes me with a wow My loves long since forgotten now On a Cartagena street a pantless toddler pleads for a dollar, his plight I disavow My regrets long since forgotten now The plaster medieval toy castle my dad made in time forsaken or lost somehow My things long since forgotten now Indelible memories lost can again be found In soulful dreams they may prove profound

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Robert Lindley

Date: 10/15/2019 9:38:00 AM

My friend, deep is the sadness you present in this superbly created piece. A pleasure to read such a profound and insightful poem.. Congratulations on your win in this contest. Love the closing and the mention of dreams that can restore joy.

Greg Gaul
Date: 10/15/2019 1:37:00 PM

Thanks for your sensitivity and understanding. Your visit and commentary are most appreciated. Kudos to you for your fine placement and your lovely poem.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/15/2019 2:42:00 AM

Memory is astonishing to say the least. A wonderful write. Congrats and prayers for you - Gina

Greg Gaul
Date: 10/15/2019 8:20:00 AM

Gina, thanks for your kind comments and visit. Your attention is most appreciated, congrats to you as well.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/14/2019 12:43:00 PM

Oh yes, memories lost can again be found. Congratulations for your win Greg :)

Greg Gaul
Date: 10/14/2019 8:49:00 PM

Heidi, thanks ever so for your thoughtful insights. Most appreciated. Thanks for your visit.

Silent One

Date: 10/14/2019 12:19:00 PM

seems like a personal write Greg.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Greg Gaul
Date: 10/14/2019 8:47:00 PM

Yes Silent One, these are all my personal memories. Taking from the old saw, write from your own experience, what you personally know. Thanks so much for your kind and thoughtful comments. Appreciate being part of your contest.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 6/13/2019 4:26:00 AM

Soulful dreams indeed. Congratulations on your win, Kai

Greg Gaul
Date: 6/13/2019 9:43:00 AM

Kai, thanks ever so for your kind visit and comments. I see your award as well and was moved by your verse. Soul wrenching, to say the least. This is noble work that poets do, make us look and at the unlookable, past ourselves.

Constance La France

Date: 3/11/2019 5:11:00 PM

Greg, oh what an emotional write, yes, our memories live on in our soulful dreams, well done ~

Greg Gaul
Date: 3/12/2019 7:31:00 AM

Dear Heart, your thoughtful comments mean a lot to me. Thank you for your visit and commentary.

L. J. Carber

Date: 3/11/2019 9:59:00 AM

I like this very much with its unique blend of disparate elements--congrats on your win, Greg.

Greg Gaul
Date: 3/12/2019 7:28:00 AM

L.J., thanks for noticing my attempt to make this a message of worldwide compassion. Appreciate your commentary.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/11/2019 8:41:00 AM

Beautiful, Greg. Congrats on your top win.

Greg Gaul
Date: 3/12/2019 7:29:00 AM

Line, thanks for your kind visit and comment.