Greg Gaul Poet Rhyme

Long Since Forgotten Now

An aged pilgrim prostrating at the steps
of Potola Palace, to her piety I bow
My feelings long since forgotten now

A coroner speaks beside an unzipped body bag
talks of my sister's suicide with furrowed brow
My sorrows long since forgotten now

To the beggar man at the Colosseum missing
half his face, I make a giving vow
My hopes long since forgotten now

A lovely young lady infatuates me
she strikes me with a wow
My loves long since forgotten now

On a Cartagena street a pantless toddler
pleads for a dollar, his plight I disavow
My regrets long since forgotten now

The plaster medieval toy castle my dad made
in time forsaken or lost somehow
My things long since forgotten now

Indelible memories lost can again be found
In soulful dreams they may prove profound

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Robert Lindley October 15, 2019 at 9:38 AM My friend, deep is the sadness you present in this superbly created piece. A pleasure to read such a profound and insightful poem.. Congratulations on your win in this contest. Love the closing and the mention of dreams that can restore joy. Greg Gaul October 15, 2019 at 1:37 PM Thanks for your sensitivity and understanding. Your visit and commentary are most appreciated. Kudos to you for your fine placement and your lovely poem.

Regina Mcintosh October 15, 2019 at 2:42 AM Memory is astonishing to say the least. A wonderful write. Congrats and prayers for you - Gina Greg Gaul October 15, 2019 at 8:20 AM Gina, thanks for your kind comments and visit. Your attention is most appreciated, congrats to you as well.

Heidi Sands October 14, 2019 at 12:43 PM Oh yes, memories lost can again be found. Congratulations for your win Greg :) Greg Gaul October 14, 2019 at 8:49 PM Heidi, thanks ever so for your thoughtful insights. Most appreciated. Thanks for your visit.

Silent One October 14, 2019 at 12:19 PM seems like a personal write Greg.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Greg Gaul October 14, 2019 at 8:47 PM Yes Silent One, these are all my personal memories. Taking from the old saw, write from your own experience, what you personally know. Thanks so much for your kind and thoughtful comments. Appreciate being part of your contest.

Kai Michael Neumann June 13, 2019 at 4:26 AM Soulful dreams indeed. Congratulations on your win, Kai Greg Gaul June 13, 2019 at 9:43 AM Kai, thanks ever so for your kind visit and comments. I see your award as well and was moved by your verse. Soul wrenching, to say the least. This is noble work that poets do, make us look and at the unlookable, past ourselves.

Constance La France March 11, 2019 at 5:11 PM Greg, oh what an emotional write, yes, our memories live on in our soulful dreams, well done ~ Greg Gaul March 12, 2019 at 7:31 AM Dear Heart, your thoughtful comments mean a lot to me. Thank you for your visit and commentary.

L. J. Carber March 11, 2019 at 9:59 AM I like this very much with its unique blend of disparate elements--congrats on your win, Greg. Greg Gaul March 12, 2019 at 7:28 AM L.J., thanks for noticing my attempt to make this a message of worldwide compassion. Appreciate your commentary.

Line Gauthier March 11, 2019 at 8:41 AM Beautiful, Greg. Congrats on your top win. Greg Gaul March 12, 2019 at 7:29 AM Line, thanks for your kind visit and comment.