Long Silence

Loneliness is here
The years have gone by quickly
The sun shines no more

Everywhere silence
Closed lips and I remain quiet
Pain shall end slowly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 12:40 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in the Your Choice Once More contest Anoucheka. Love, Carol
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November 13, 2011 at 1:26 AM
A.G, CONGRATULATIONS, in BRIANS ;-) contest,..p.d.
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November 12, 2011 at 7:05 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win with this wonderful Haiku!------Lori
Gangabissoon Avatar
November 12, 2011 at 4:26 AM
Thanks to everyone for their wishes and for appreciating :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 11:34 PM
This is a very nice poem, sadness and loneliness well portrayed.
Dufresne Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 5:29 PM
congratulations to you Anoucheka on you cool win in this contest with these Haikus
Song Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 4:21 PM
Anou, This feeling is heavy like suffocating honey in your double haiku. Congrats on this bronze win. Very lovely. Gwendolen
Sweetheart Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 9:38 AM
Congrats on a fabulous third place win with these elegant lines luv..
Gangabissoon Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 2:25 AM
Thank you to Brian Strand for selecting my poem at third place! :)
Ramos Avatar
November 9, 2011 at 4:37 AM
Loneliness is painful seems the underlying theme. Aging and loneliness. Moving and thoughtful. Thanks
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