Long Silence

Loneliness is here The years have gone by quickly The sun shines no more Everywhere silence Closed lips and I remain quiet Pain shall end slowly

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/16/2011 12:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in the Your Choice Once More contest Anoucheka. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/13/2011 1:26:00 AM

A.G, CONGRATULATIONS, in BRIANS ;-) contest,..p.d.

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 11/12/2011 7:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win with this wonderful Haiku!------Lori

Anoucheka Gangabissoon

Date: 11/12/2011 4:26:00 AM

Thanks to everyone for their wishes and for appreciating :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/11/2011 11:34:00 PM

This is a very nice poem, sadness and loneliness well portrayed.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/11/2011 5:29:00 PM

congratulations to you Anoucheka on you cool win in this contest with these Haikus

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/11/2011 4:21:00 PM

Anou, This feeling is heavy like suffocating honey in your double haiku. Congrats on this bronze win. Very lovely. Gwendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/11/2011 9:38:00 AM

Congrats on a fabulous third place win with these elegant lines luv..

Anoucheka Gangabissoon

Date: 11/11/2011 2:25:00 AM

Thank you to Brian Strand for selecting my poem at third place! :)

Ruben Ramos

Date: 11/9/2011 4:37:00 AM

Loneliness is painful seems the underlying theme. Aging and loneliness. Moving and thoughtful. Thanks