Long Rain

with my child on my shoulder, i walk in the long rain carrying the heaviness of shattered dreams

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Beata Agustin

Date: 7/19/2024 4:32:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/20/2016 1:48:00 PM

anand, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 1:59:00 PM

RAMESH, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/1/2013 5:10:00 AM

Very sad and serious but thought provoking, Anand

Chris Boskovski

Date: 8/31/2013 11:58:00 PM

Very well written poem... I love it! Great write keep up the good work. :)

Ramesh Anand
Date: 9/1/2013 12:07:00 AM

Many thanks, Christopher