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Long Pier

the pier ghostly
as the fog rolls in---
weighing anchors
was it not here
we met the first time?

heavy mists
of memories
making steps---
timbers creak
yet, I find you not

this dampness
that rolls from my eyes---
tangible streaks
that exhale
the unforgettable you

© Debra Squyres 
    Tanka Trio 1/10/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/10/2016 8:56:00 PM
Helloooo! :) This is a beautiful expression of a hearts lament in the absence of our loved ones.
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Date: 1/10/2016 2:59:00 PM
ohh, how sentimentally put, debra.. nice seeing you again with this superb tanka.. huggs
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