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Long Lost Love

I dream I kiss your smile And hold you for a while; When I wake you’re gone again. It’s been so long - too long. If this is right or wrong, My longing drives me insane. Be my love; be my friend. My love for you won’t end. Each night and day I feel pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/24/2011 8:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's "Balassi Stanza" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/23/2011 4:54:00 PM
Ah, the madness of suffering heartbeak.. described to a T here, Jack. Well done and grats! Namaste~N
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Date: 10/23/2011 8:47:00 AM
Congrats Jack on an amazing win with this wonderful write my friend.. so touching and intense .. kudos .. luv..
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Date: 10/23/2011 5:31:00 AM
Lovely verse Jack, congratulations on a worthy presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/23/2011 3:48:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in my contest, Jack
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Date: 10/22/2011 9:41:00 PM
sensitive and sweet write Jack.. emotion filled expressive lines luv.. good luck if for a contest my friend... so happy to read u once more..
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Date: 10/21/2011 9:23:00 AM
,Good morning,~ Jack ~ how are you this wonderful Friday :-) morning?? As for me, I'm missing everyone I know here on the soup PLUS more. *glad we are back up*. By the way I'm also stopping by to read a couple of poems OR commenting the ones I could not all week or yesterday, after being shut out for them awful few days..ENJOYED YOUR POEM, thank you for sharing! Take care and have yourself a wonderful Friday~ ;-) Always,..p.d.
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