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Long Live the Queen

LONG LIVE THE QUEEN A MURMURING BUZZ SPREAD THROUGH THE HIVE THE RISING, HUMMING SOUND OF “LONG LIVE THE QUEEN!” John G. Lawless 5/8/2015

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Skat A

Date: 6/6/2015 11:12:00 PM

Congratulations John... SKAT

Eve Roper

Date: 6/6/2015 6:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win hugs eve

Jan Allison

Date: 6/6/2015 4:22:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations John:-) Hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/8/2015 4:23:00 PM

Good one..Totally playing with words and ideas..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

John Lawless
Date: 5/10/2015 8:44:00 AM

Thanks Sara, I've always enjoyed word games

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2015 2:32:00 PM

so cool. I really hope to come up with one so simple like this but CUTE

John Lawless
Date: 5/10/2015 8:44:00 AM

Andrea, I have always been fascinated by the place of the "Queen" bee in the success and expansion of the hive. This sort of jumped onto the paper when I saw the contest title.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/8/2015 11:00:00 AM

lol Love your take on the theme got to say it's different! Hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/10/2015 8:52:00 AM

Judy has a great sense of humour - just hope she likes my take on the theme lol:-) hugs jan

John Lawless
Date: 5/10/2015 8:41:00 AM

Jan, I didn't submit this to the contest as she was looking for poems about Queen Elizabeth...perhaps I will drop it in...