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Long In the Tooth

Age is a gradual process, So gradual, one doesn't notice Changes until they are so defined That they start to affect your mind, Sometimes, more than I care to say, My mind is elsewhere is where it stays. I try to pretend I am not old, Days when the fog clears, I feel bold, Until I undress myself to shower, Which could take an hour. Before I sit on my shower chair To wash my aging frame and grey hair. Showering makes me out of breath, I catch sight of myself in the mirror looking like death Who is around the corner peering at me. To see how much more help I need to keep me walking, And talking. Hearing aid, intraocular lenses, spectacles, new hip, cap tooth, Toilet chair, walker. a picker-upper, strewth. I am still here at 84. I am blessed and have a lot to be thankful for

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Date: 9/7/2021 3:34:00 AM
You are 84! Wow! Only twenty or thirty years to go! "I catch sight of myself in the mirror looking like death" I try to never look in the mirror now which is silly, age is EARNED. Show it off!
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 9/8/2021 8:10:00 PM
Age doesn't alter the fact that you still feel a girl inside... And I do not like to see old girls looking like mutton dressed up as lamb....
Date: 8/26/2021 8:46:00 AM
Shirley, I felt like I was looking in a mirror. Nearing 80, all of these things spoke to me...or more like they slapped me in the face and said "Get with the program!"
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 8/26/2021 5:58:00 PM
Your comment made me laugh. I had trouble saying 80 four years ago, it sounds so much older than 79. Old age isn't for cowards, I read that somewhere. So like you say Milt "Get with the program"

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