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Long Green Lawns

I love you more than sunshine right now You driving to other peoples houses drives me up walls Your limbs taking clothes off Let me pour from the bubbling core Welding into you Running like rabbits down long green lawns.

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/1/2010 3:09:00 AM

Hi Matt! Thanks for the heads up about my soupmail--I don't seem to be lucky with sending it, but will try again--about your poem 1st: The unique approach of your poem is what caught my eye here--won't be hard to imagine this in a song lyric ;) sweet in its own way! -- it was for your contest--Just wanted to ask whether I should put in "The Life of:_____" or would just the name suffice? Thanks! Wouldn't want my entry to be disqualified...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/28/2010 5:11:00 PM

Interesting comparison here. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/28/2010 2:19:00 PM

Oh Matt, Your last line makes your entire poem seem enchanted. I loved the visual splender of it all. Aloha, Connie

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/28/2010 1:19:00 PM

This is Outstandingly beautiful..cHARMA

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/28/2010 1:07:00 PM

impulsive! brilliant last line. Light & Love (Why begin each line with a CAP and then use 1 period? Those in the know LOL..not me...want to know?)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/28/2010 11:45:00 AM

So romantic, Matt! Was glad to hear Hawaii was spared from the tsunami threat. You're probably out on a "long green lawn" today basking in the sunshine and enjoying a glass of bubbly. Connie is from Hawaii, too! Love, Carolyn

Susan Palli

Date: 2/28/2010 5:55:00 AM

nice expression of love