Long Good Byes

You left me, oh so, long ago
my baby, my only child
before I wanted to let go
you'd said your first good bye.

For you had so much work to do
you needed space to grow,
and surely could not do so
with a fretting mother in tow.

My son you walk beside me now
rejoined, grown up, a man,
trying to explain to me,
you're doing the best you can.

You didn’t mean to cause me pain
such anxiety and fear
all of those small good byes
were just meant to get you here.

The whole world we gave to you
and it took a quite awhile
to see the sights and sounds 
around to, wander and compile.

Now, you are searching for a wife
hope one day to have a child,
and as you walk beside me
we ponder your learning style.

How each of us has our own path
which parents can’t walk for them.
How children grow to be men
that’s what good byes were for then.


Contest: The Second Hand Emotion
Poet: Debbie Guzzi
 *Love of a child....emotions sadness /anxiety
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Richards Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 12:09 PM
Oh wow.....did this one pull the strings of my heart ?! How well I know these feelings....too well, I'm afraid! (x-3!) You've expressed what other mothers struggle to say in their own way...only better and with heartfelt tenderness. Lovely poem, Deb!
Brown Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 6:06 AM
Congratulations Debbie on your HM in Dana'lynn's "The Secondhand Emotion" contest. Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 9:06 PM
Congrats, Deb. Excellent write. Nice going. luv Ralph
Dufresne Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 5:04 PM
the pain and love for children must be tremendous. Congratulations to you Debbie
Bloomsfield Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 4:27 AM
You misted my eyes with these beauty and touched my heart with love,beautiful poem ma : )
Singh Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 10:17 PM
i just loved this one. sometimes when you read stuff you are just spellbound because it is exactly what you see. great work.
Cohan Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 3:55 AM
Deb my son is 26, left to live in Hawaii 13 yrs. ago, now has a a hot wife w/legs that don't quit&son..i told him the frst time he called from Hawaii i said the word good was removd from the term goodbye-your poem, every syllable, every word, every adjective, every line, every stanza was just so "WRITE" on.so you! any parent whose eye's don't moisten from your words then the word "stoic" diminishes the definition...fondly, ~free cee! u cud have writtn my wedding poem for him, ok, better!
Henderson Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 10:16 AM
Good bye often brings us much closer together. That is a fact.
Eastman Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 6:03 PM
My son is there, too. Great poem.
Guzzi Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 6:36 PM
Mine is in the Mission District in San Fran is your son in San Fran too? OR just in the same emotional space?
Peranteau Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 3:44 PM
Touching dear poet, as I know this goodbye quite well, and fret the day Noah walks his way. At least I have about ten years left ! *smiles* Beautiful and heart felt write Debbie ! Have a wonderful week...much love, james Oh, I left a comment for ya on, "peek-a-boo lexicon".
Long Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 2:57 PM
this was beautiful nicely done thanks for your comments as well cory
Warden Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 11:01 AM
From the heart...Very good..hugs
Falotico Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 8:54 AM
Touching write my dear Debbie.... writing from the heart is always the best way to express....enjoyed ....Michael
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