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Long Gone

Hey dad this one's for you a few lines and rhymes and some thoughts too this isn't aboout you it's more about me and my own secret desires to be completey set free free from anger and doubt and sadness too free from the lies that are false and the memories that are true to pretend that you were there through the tough times and the sad guiding and supporting for once a good dad I wish you had been there to see my life the wins and losses not causing strife I hope this one works out for you I really and truly do and that he wont feel lost and abandonded like the rest of us do one day you'll realize these words are true I have one last sentiment to share with you long gone are the days that excuses will be made for you and further gone are the days that I believed them true

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/14/2012 1:27:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Tara. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/13/2012 6:57:00 PM
lovely!! happy writing!!!
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