Long Beach 2008

Long beach 2008

I miss you
miss my heart stopping
miss the noodles
The coffee
The Two Little dogs
The neighbor Who said?
You Look A little gray
miss Not being alone
Miss Dying
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Palli Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 10:39 AM
Can feel the pain.
Devonshire Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 3:45 PM
Sometimes when you miss someone this much, you feel like life has no meaning. I like the way you conveyed this in your last two lines, Thomas. Beautiful write filled with longing and imagery from a time when you did not feel so alone. Hope you are recovering from this loss, Thomas. Love, Carolyn
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