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2005 song for C.

Long As You Love Me

You pull my strings, I'll fly so high 
You pull my strings, I'll touch the sky
I can't go wrong as long as you love me
You know I'm so in love with you.

You whisper sweet things, sweet like the morning dew
You whisper baby, I'm so in love with you
I can't go wrong as long as you want me and
That why I'm so in love with you.

CHORUS: Take it from me ,
I love you so
Take if from me , I'll never let you go.
As sure as you love me, I can't go wrong 
You know im so in love with you. 

You give me sweet dreams,
Then make them come true.
Your loves like sweet cream,
Your kisses too

I won't go wrong when you say 
That you love me
That why I'm so in love with you.

CM7th / Adim/ Dmi 7th / G13. 
Chorus: Dmi 7th / A 7th / D7th-A / Gsus--GMaj
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Romios Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 3:29 PM
Perfect, Robert. You, my man are such a talent! And a musician! I envy you but…I do applaud you, you romantic soul. Hugs, Pangie xx
Ray Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 3:37 PM
instead of sweet cream....how about ambrosia, food of the gods....divinity combines candy as well as a hint of the Dine....build your vocabulary....read poets and learn how to steal lines
Ray Avatar
August 4, 2022 at 6:35 PM
may i also suggest the use of a thesaurus....the word "love" alone has so many other attributes, enchantment, passion, ardor, desire, besotted is a favorite of mine....great loves such as Cupid (Eros) and Psyche, the list is huge...read and your poetry grows...and you will love your labor in it all the more...welcome to the magic of romanticism
Zottola Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 4:24 PM
Thank you for the critique. If you have a line suggestion pass it along. Im open to making it better.
Ray Avatar
August 4, 2022 at 6:13 PM
i am with Robert on this one....lyrics....the lines continue to convey the love i see a need for some poetic metaphors....Bruno Mars has some great ones in his song Just The Way You Are...notice how he conveys one after another....it is a great dish you have written, just a bit more spice,
Zottola Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 4:25 PM
As I told Robert, I appreciate the feedback. Any line suggestions?
Gorelick Avatar
August 4, 2022 at 6:02 PM
A crisp charming purity. A professional song writer? Robert
Zottola Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 4:27 PM
Not professional although I played in a doowop band for quite a while. Any suggestions?
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