Poetic Form: Personification
Inspired: 2023 December 02
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Our Hawaiian Sun got burned yesterday and cried all night ... usually day after our tradewinds turns and ... they'd betrayedwinds and our baby then shone me the coconut tree N U T S! all gone just dangling palms looks like tourists palms ahh, fiddlestcks more unfinished castles in the sand crumbling ... kind of defines McLean.
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