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Lonesomeness

When ghosts of seclusion haunt, And murky clouds of gloom veil the mind, When tears on rosy cheeks freely flaunt, Heart misses a beat and lags behind, Must you intervene and rescue the kind, Certainly prejudiced is the sublime, Unable to introspect as love is blind, Drowning in deep ocean of worldly mime ! Written on 3/8/14 Contest- Vibrant verse 2 Sponsor- Charlotte Puddifoot Awarded 7th place Now for contest- Solitude Sponsor- Scott thirty seven Now for contest- One sad poem by PD A Now for contest 'Any poem- 12 lines max' by Rick Parise

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/20/2014 10:11:00 PM

wow, you have had this one in many contest and it scored for you again. congrats, dr. Upma

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/19/2014 12:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Dr. Sharma.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/17/2014 1:46:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 8/4/2014 4:58:00 PM

This is vibrantly beautiful, Upma! Peter talks wisely of loneliness and aloneness...and, yes, the rhyme is a great asset in this write. gl in the contest. // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/3/2014 12:13:00 PM

Dear Dr. Upma, This stunning poem is a good example of why you have become one of my favorite poets. Surely, I wish you success in the contest and in every endeavor. I may have to leave this site. Sending you a Soup Mail. You are a remarkable writer! Love, Carolyn

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/3/2014 10:28:00 PM

Thanks for ur very lovely n encouraging words and continued support always my dear friend Carolyn! I would request u not to leave my dear,, u r such a life to the soup,, what wud be soup without a soul ? soupmail

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/3/2014 12:13:00 PM

Faved this one!