Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Rhyme

Lonesomeness

When ghosts of seclusion haunt,
And murky clouds of gloom veil the mind,
When tears on rosy cheeks freely flaunt,
Heart misses a beat and lags behind,

Must you intervene and rescue the kind,
Certainly prejudiced is the sublime,
Unable to introspect as love is blind,
Drowning in deep ocean of worldly mime !


Written on 3/8/14
Contest- Vibrant verse 2
Sponsor- Charlotte Puddifoot

Awarded 7th place

Now for contest- Solitude
Sponsor- Scott thirty seven

Now for contest- One sad poem by PD A

Now for contest 'Any poem- 12 lines max' by Rick Parise

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Andrea Dietrich November 20, 2014 at 10:11 PM wow, you have had this one in many contest and it scored for you again. congrats, dr. Upma

Brenda Meier-Hans November 19, 2014 at 12:33 PM Congratulations on your win Dr. Sharma.

Jan Allison November 17, 2014 at 1:46 AM dropping back with my congrats Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus August 4, 2014 at 4:58 PM This is vibrantly beautiful, Upma! Peter talks wisely of loneliness and aloneness...and, yes, the rhyme is a great asset in this write. gl in the contest. // paul

Carolyn Devonshire August 3, 2014 at 12:13 PM Dear Dr. Upma, This stunning poem is a good example of why you have become one of my favorite poets. Surely, I wish you success in the contest and in every endeavor. I may have to leave this site. Sending you a Soup Mail. You are a remarkable writer! Love, Carolyn Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 3, 2014 at 10:28 PM Thanks for ur very lovely n encouraging words and continued support always my dear friend Carolyn! I would request u not to leave my dear,, u r such a life to the soup,, what wud be soup without a soul ? soupmail Carolyn Devonshire August 3, 2014 at 12:13 PM Faved this one!

Jerry T Curtis August 3, 2014 at 7:39 AM Brilliant Dr Upma. I've felt like this before. Good luck in the contest. Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 3, 2014 at 10:32 PM Thanks Jerry !

Jan Allison August 3, 2014 at 7:35 AM very touching with wonderful imagery. Good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xx Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 3, 2014 at 10:31 PM Thanks Jan!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 3, 2014 at 6:54 AM - Really beautiful and touching, Dr. Upna - Hope this will be a winning poem ! - Good luck! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 3, 2014 at 7:03 AM Thnx for ur lovely words n wishes Anne Lise !