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Lonelyness

I find myself once again, alone and sitting on my bed Staring at the cold walls as my soul trys to escape from getting sad Some nights loneliness gets to me, thats when i shed tear after tear Is like a wave of sadness came over me, without any warning creeping from behind so i pretend im not alone and turn the closet light on Is my pathetic little way to get my crying under control i know im not the only one that feel the way i do So even if we feel loneliness we don't have to live it alone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/10/2012 7:20:00 PM
sad lovely piece...beautifully done jett
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Date: 11/9/2012 8:30:00 AM
I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Isabel. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/8/2012 7:41:00 PM
Isabel, this is really nice. It is really sad to be and feel lonely. At the time I read your poem I were in one of my lonely stages. It no fun at all. Thanks for a lovely reading!!! ;-)
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Date: 11/8/2012 1:03:00 PM
Welcome to P-Soup Isabel - You write very well, I like all your poems. - Hope you will get much pleasure to share your poems here with us. - Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise (ps. love your teddy)
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Date: 11/8/2012 1:10:00 PM
Thank you......Teddy's name is cuteness. Ive had him for years.....thanks again..

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