Lonelyness

I find myself once again, alone and 
sitting on my bed
Staring at the cold walls as my soul 
trys to escape from getting sad
Some nights loneliness gets to me, 
thats when i shed tear after tear
Is like a wave of sadness came over 
me, without any warning creeping 
from behind
so i pretend im not alone and turn 
the closet light on
Is my pathetic little way to get my 
crying under control
i know im not the only one that feel 
the way i do
So even if we feel loneliness we 
don't have to live it alone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Franco Avatar
November 10, 2012 at 7:20 PM
sad lovely piece...beautifully done jett
Brown Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 8:30 AM
I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Isabel. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 7:41 PM
Isabel, this is really nice. It is really sad to be and feel lonely. At the time I read your poem I were in one of my lonely stages. It no fun at all. Thanks for a lovely reading!!! ;-)
Andresen Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 1:03 PM
Welcome to P-Soup Isabel - You write very well, I like all your poems. - Hope you will get much pleasure to share your poems here with us. - Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise (ps. love your teddy)
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November 8, 2012 at 1:10 PM
Thank you......Teddy's name is cuteness. Ive had him for years.....thanks again..
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