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Lonely Tree 2009

Brave and bold are you The green shading what you feel Stuck to rock with blue

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Date: 7/29/2009 2:25:00 PM

So much said in just three lines. Interesting use of color to convey your thoughts. Enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/29/2009 12:54:00 PM

Nice Haiku. Keep writing. Sara

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 7/28/2009 5:12:00 PM

Pure description.

Naomi Jenkins

Date: 7/28/2009 3:42:00 PM

thanks

Derrick Burton

Date: 7/28/2009 12:07:00 PM

Short, powerful, and I really enjoyed it alot. Enjoy your day.

Naomi Jenkins

Date: 7/28/2009 4:49:00 AM

I wonder who won???

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

Date: 7/24/2009 3:59:00 PM

exelent haiku something i myself was never talented enough to write really good write keep up the good work

James Fraser

Date: 7/24/2009 2:28:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku, and your first one, Wow from this Highlander>>James

Naomi Jenkins

Date: 7/15/2009 7:00:00 AM

Oh thank you, you guys. It's the first I've ever done, having the picture really helped...

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/14/2009 3:16:00 PM

this one is a winner in Raul's contest! jim

Naomi Jenkins

Date: 7/14/2009 11:48:00 AM

cheers! x

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/14/2009 11:41:00 AM

I would say yes. Like your Haiku. Sara