Lonely Tree 2009

Brave and bold are you
The green shading what you feel
Stuck to rock with blue
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 29, 2009 at 2:25 PM
So much said in just three lines. Interesting use of color to convey your thoughts. Enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen
Kendrick Avatar
July 29, 2009 at 12:54 PM
Nice Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
Shahwan Avatar
July 28, 2009 at 5:12 PM
Pure description.
Jenkins Avatar
July 28, 2009 at 3:42 PM
thanks
Burton Avatar
July 28, 2009 at 12:07 PM
Short, powerful, and I really enjoyed it alot. Enjoy your day.
Jenkins Avatar
July 28, 2009 at 4:49 AM
I wonder who won???
Robbins Aka Gonzo Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 3:59 PM
exelent haiku something i myself was never talented enough to write really good write keep up the good work
Fraser Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 2:28 PM
Beautiful Haiku, and your first one, Wow from this Highlander>>James
Jenkins Avatar
July 15, 2009 at 7:00 AM
Oh thank you, you guys. It's the first I've ever done, having the picture really helped...
Goff Avatar
July 14, 2009 at 3:16 PM
this one is a winner in Raul's contest! jim
Jenkins Avatar
July 14, 2009 at 11:48 AM
cheers! x
Kendrick Avatar
July 14, 2009 at 11:41 AM
I would say yes. Like your Haiku. Sara
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