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Lonely Quest

He loved her once In words and deep touch Of glances and flowers Kissing away the hours to forever She trusted him once In heart and divine song Of sighs and smiles Holding on to each other’s dreams He kissed her on the heart Passionate, eager lips Devoured it with reverent hunger Then, then he tore it apart Her sacred self scarred and chained To a man who played a game The game is called “whose to blame” Selfish refrain Didn’t you promise forever In your words of consuming love That is until the day your muse woke up And you found another to worship and dress up Who are you? Why were you? What have you? When did you? My questioning heart on a lonely quest.

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Date: 1/24/2024 8:27:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/11/2020 8:18:00 AM
Hello Lucy, Dream, so nice to meet you. Welcome to Poetry Soup. You will heal from this and your heart will be stronger. You will find true love one day. This person will be alone if he does n ot change his heart. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 3/5/2020 3:02:00 PM
The pain of lost love. You will find another lady to love you.
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Date: 3/4/2020 11:33:00 PM
Out into the Desert you go dear poet, in that lonely quest, there you will find the answers and perhaps maybe something much better than that place you left far behind you. Lx
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Date: 3/4/2020 9:56:00 AM
Ir seems that when a relationship flounders somebody has to be lumbered with the blame, not that it does much good; many questions probably should have been addressed much earlier! Your expressive poem gives us much to think about. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 3/3/2020 9:41:00 AM
Powerful poem, Lacy.
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Date: 3/3/2020 7:57:00 AM
Profound piece. Lovely done.
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