Lonely Loon

lonely loon on lake
       Looking calling for his mate
          Moon beams crying too


   Just learned about syllables in Haiku. Updated
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Cook Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 10:10 PM
Very nice! :)
Blanca Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 9:08 AM
Thanks my friend
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 12:54 PM
Hello Carlo, as i read this Haiku, i can see the lonely loon. Have a nice day my friend.
Blanca Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 6:25 PM
Thank you Darlene.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 10:40 PM
Lovely subject! <3 Kim
Blanca Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 9:39 AM
Thank you.
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 8:53 PM
beautiful...I reckon that lake must be getting crowded. :)
Blanca Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 9:45 PM
Thank you.
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