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Lonely Girl

Lonely Girl wrapped tight in brown cloak, flashing Mona Lisa eyes - lonely lioness

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Luke Hobbs

Date: 9/3/2018 5:52:00 AM

This one really evokes images. Even the visual layout of the poem really contributes a sense of urgency and acceleration to the ending phrase. Well done, madam.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/3/2018 8:08:00 AM

Awwwww, Luke I really appreciate your wonderful supportive feedback - so encouraging! Thank you, my friend! Pandita

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/18/2014 10:56:00 PM

I offer you my blanket of loneliness, I know the feeling! Beautiful poem!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/19/2014 6:36:00 PM

Arthur, thank you so very much for your wonderful feedback! You always encourage me to keep writing! Thank you. Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 8/29/2014 10:45:00 PM

beautiful, strong woman! Nice write! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/29/2014 11:36:00 PM

That's right, she may be alone but she enjoys her solitude! Thanks for the compliments, Kika!

Sean Claudine

Date: 7/29/2014 1:17:00 AM

Great poem, it says so much with so few words.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/29/2014 9:52:00 AM

Many thanks, dear Sean, for your kind comments and compliments. I truly appreciate the support and encouragement! Warmest regards.

Robin Davis

Date: 6/21/2014 5:40:00 PM

Pandita Short but full of emotion. I could feel the loneliness and longing of this girl to find a love. Thank you for the great comment on my I Did It My Way poem.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/22/2014 5:25:00 AM

Thank you, dear Robin, for your very kind compliments! Warmest regards.

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/10/2014 9:37:00 AM

nice Haiku, Pandita. Mohan

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/10/2014 1:17:00 PM

Thank you so much, Mohan! As always, I appreciate your compliments