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Lonely Girl

Lonely Girl

wrapped tight in brown cloak,
flashing Mona Lisa eyes -
lonely lioness

birdlonelinesslongingsad lovesenryu

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Luke Hobbs

September 3, 2018 at 5:52 AM

This one really evokes images. Even the visual layout of the poem really contributes a sense of urgency and acceleration to the ending phrase. Well done, madam.

Pandita Sietesantos

September 3, 2018 at 8:08 AM

Awwwww, Luke I really appreciate your wonderful supportive feedback - so encouraging! Thank you, my friend! Pandita

Arthur Vaso

October 18, 2014 at 10:56 PM

I offer you my blanket of loneliness, I know the feeling! Beautiful poem!

Pandita Sietesantos

October 19, 2014 at 6:36 PM

Arthur, thank you so very much for your wonderful feedback! You always encourage me to keep writing! Thank you. Pandita

Kika Ayala

August 29, 2014 at 10:45 PM

beautiful, strong woman! Nice write! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos

August 29, 2014 at 11:36 PM

That's right, she may be alone but she enjoys her solitude! Thanks for the compliments, Kika!

Sean Claudine

July 29, 2014 at 1:17 AM

Great poem, it says so much with so few words.

Pandita Sietesantos

July 29, 2014 at 9:52 AM

Many thanks, dear Sean, for your kind comments and compliments. I truly appreciate the support and encouragement! Warmest regards.

Robin Davis

June 21, 2014 at 5:40 PM

Pandita Short but full of emotion. I could feel the loneliness and longing of this girl to find a love. Thank you for the great comment on my I Did It My Way poem.

Pandita Sietesantos

June 22, 2014 at 5:25 AM

Thank you, dear Robin, for your very kind compliments! Warmest regards.