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Lonely Girl

Sitting here alone not knowing where to go she wonders who cares about her she thinks of her future not about her career not a job but who she will spend her life with shes a lonely girl now and migh be forever because no one sees her shes invisible to everyone shes done with everyone she just want to be love by her true love she cant do it anymore no one notices her anymore she desides to take her life with on bullet to her head she leaves no inpact on the world but leaves on an imoact to the one that actually loved her but she will never no she dead and gone now

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/8/2011 9:04:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme.. hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
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Date: 4/8/2011 4:04:00 PM
Ive been reading your work and you are a great writer!! I'd like to invite you to.. www.poeticvoice.ning.com We are an online writing community that provides writers with the feedback, motivation, and advice needed to achieve their goals.The Poetic Voice Community is fast and easy to join, and you will not get lost in it's easy maneuvering features. We at Poetic Voice hope to grow as a community of friends. Our intention, and wish is to learn and share with others. I hope to see you there!
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Date: 4/8/2011 12:23:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. Your poetry gave me a surprise with the ending...I like it...looking forward to more of your creativity...Judy
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Date: 4/8/2011 4:13:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sara. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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