Lonely Farewell Dance

and in the shadows sets the amaretto sun-

the solitude has ascended and splashes of eventide fade 
into the ivory glazed moonlight, but I am forsaken and 
left alone as the forest wood remembers my sorrow.

a willow weeps for me-
she lends me a branch to wipe the salt running down my cheeks, 
                       for she is my salvation tonight,
my guard against all that has left me in endless darkness. 

                     -it has arrived-
desolation’s farewell dance. (I cannot breathe)
it resounds in a melody only my shattered soul can comprehend. 
an aria of regret runs down my nape and I am drowning in 
spiritual apathy…
             once again. 

the night’s sullen blanket envelopes me, but the warmth turns to 
ice and I bathe in the bitterness of the saturnine sky-
forever lost in lonely memories. 
                                                 for you were my cadence...
                        ...now I am dying in rhythmic silence. 




August 23, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 8/27/2018 9:50:00 PM
A fantastic poem that brilliantly expresses a special kind of sorrow luloo. Congratulations on your second placement! : )
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Date: 8/26/2018 6:49:00 PM
Oh my. Such a forlorn poem of complete sadness but beautifully written. Congratulations on your win. I really like the weeping willow part. Well done.
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Date: 8/27/2018 9:42:00 AM
thank you sweet Susan :)-luloo
Date: 8/25/2018 11:27:00 PM
Hi Laura Loo...what a sad but beautiful poem! And, though I know it is fictional it does hit home for those of us who have loved and lost. Congrats on your 2nd place win in the contest.
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Date: 8/27/2018 9:42:00 AM
thank you sweet Carole :)-luloo
Date: 8/25/2018 11:16:00 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win n Love.
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Date: 8/27/2018 9:41:00 AM
many thanks sweet Anisha :)-luloo
Date: 8/25/2018 6:33:00 AM
Lovely, Laura. Congratulations on this win! ...Fran
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Date: 8/27/2018 9:41:00 AM
thank you dear Fran :)-luloo
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