Lonely Farewell Dance

and in the shadows sets the amaretto sun-

the solitude has ascended and splashes of eventide fade 
into the ivory glazed moonlight, but I am forsaken and 
left alone as the forest wood remembers my sorrow.

a willow weeps for me-
she lends me a branch to wipe the salt running down my cheeks, 
                       for she is my salvation tonight,
my guard against all that has left me in endless darkness. 

                     -it has arrived-
desolation’s farewell dance. (I cannot breathe)
it resounds in a melody only my shattered soul can comprehend. 
an aria of regret runs down my nape and I am drowning in 
spiritual apathy…
             once again. 

the night’s sullen blanket envelopes me, but the warmth turns to 
ice and I bathe in the bitterness of the saturnine sky-
forever lost in lonely memories. 
                                                 for you were my cadence...
                        ...now I am dying in rhythmic silence. 




August 23, 2018
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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 9:50 PM
A fantastic poem that brilliantly expresses a special kind of sorrow luloo. Congratulations on your second placement! : )
Gentry Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 6:49 PM
Oh my. Such a forlorn poem of complete sadness but beautifully written. Congratulations on your win. I really like the weeping willow part. Well done.
Scars Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 9:42 AM
thank you sweet Susan :)-luloo
Duet Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 11:27 PM
Hi Laura Loo...what a sad but beautiful poem! And, though I know it is fictional it does hit home for those of us who have loved and lost. Congrats on your 2nd place win in the contest.
Scars Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 9:42 AM
thank you sweet Carole :)-luloo
Dutta Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 11:16 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win n Love.
Scars Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 9:41 AM
many thanks sweet Anisha :)-luloo
Grasso Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 6:33 AM
Lovely, Laura. Congratulations on this win! ...Fran
Scars Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 9:41 AM
thank you dear Fran :)-luloo
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