Julie Alcin Poet Couplet

Lonely Bench

I remember the day
When I walked away
Not even saying goodbye
Just leaving you with a lie

When our kiss was French
And we were at that bench
Sitting under that tree
It happened so magically

But my heart started racing because of the heat
Unfortunately so did me feet
Now it feels like my heart was hit by a wrench
As I sit here thinking of you, on this lonely bench

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Andrea Dietrich March 29, 2013 at 4:56 PM Congratulations on another win!! Nice to see this one. Julie Alcin March 30, 2013 at 11:34 AM Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words

Poet Destroyer A March 28, 2013 at 10:16 PM This is nice Julie,,,goodnight~Linda Julie Alcin March 30, 2013 at 11:34 AM Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 28, 2013 at 3:47 AM Congratulations on your win Julie xx Julie Alcin March 30, 2013 at 11:34 AM Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words

Donna Jones March 27, 2013 at 5:16 PM Congrats on your intriguing poem and win...Donna Julie Alcin March 30, 2013 at 11:34 AM Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words

Joyce Johnson March 27, 2013 at 3:41 PM Congratulations on your poem and win. Love, Joyce Julie Alcin March 30, 2013 at 11:35 AM Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words

Funom Makama March 23, 2013 at 10:06 AM beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem! Julie Alcin March 30, 2013 at 11:35 AM Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words