Lonely and Scary Night

I personally like poems that rhyme but this poem feels rhyme bound to me, as if you value rhyming more than story telling perhaps. The poem would befit too if you were to share more here of the human side of your anxiety. You focus on things and I would like to know more about the people or situation that has made you feel so lonely. I would ncourage you to not try so hard to write a finished poem in one draft. Sometime I write things in free verse first so that I can focus more on the emotions I am trying to communicate. You might try that sometime and then begin adding rhyme in the 2nd or third revision. Try not to be impatient with poetry, give it a chance to breathe and good things will come!