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Lonely

fog embraces me
with infinite tenderness
rain falls in my heart
the soul pulls the mantle close
life can be a soft grey sleep

4/8/2017
For contest: Tanka
sponsored by Rick Parise

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Date: 7/24/2018 10:58:00 PM
Well penned, Agnes.
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Date: 4/10/2017 9:36:00 AM
Truly beautiful, Agnes, especially the last two lines! #7 Regards // paul
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Date: 4/9/2017 8:40:00 PM
Oh, that last line just melds with the rest of your lines so beautifully. Very nicely done!
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Date: 4/9/2017 3:48:00 PM
The images are so tender and exquisite that you can see and feel the soul pulling the 'mantle' gently over as the heart is lulled into a gentle 'grey sleep':) A 7 Amitiés
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 4/9/2017 8:07:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, Anne-Marie.
Date: 4/9/2017 10:13:00 AM
Great write Agnes..
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 4/9/2017 8:07:00 PM
Thanks, Joseph.
Date: 4/8/2017 10:00:00 PM
Filled with melancholy, beautiful write.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 4/9/2017 8:07:00 PM
Thank you, arthur.