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Lonely

All around me, moving, talking The whispers reach me, but fall on deaf ears I just keep on walking forwards But I'm moving into my fears They just don't understand me My problems, my doubts Lie awake waiting during nighttime For my social life to sprout I can step into the limelight Show off, hang out But behind those cold, closed walls I can't keep the loneliness out They love me, they hate me My world torn apart Then laying broken off to the side, My cold, lifeless heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/1/2017 2:52:00 PM
I think the angst is usually impermanent; take heart! Or, exalt in the air and darkness whistling though your soul - I like your poems.
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Date: 2/24/2017 8:50:00 AM
This is such a poetic picture of the fear created by anxiety and the feeling of being alone, not mattering. This was well expressed.
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Date: 2/22/2017 9:06:00 AM
This entry is so very sad and expressive. Pain somehow always makes fine poetry. May the words in the entry be creativity and not true to life. Well Done
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