Lonely

The tears in my eyes that makes them red ,
with a loneliness in them which makes my heart so upset.
The pretty flowers which surround me,fade away after looking at me.
My condition is so bad that I'm unable to do what i can.
therefore i wish for a good day ahead ,let's see I'll be waiting for what happens next.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Orozco Avatar
September 5, 2014 at 11:04 PM
Nice little poem. Straight from the heart. - Edward
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January 20, 2014 at 11:26 PM
Once again, you captured the emotions I am feeling right now... Crystal, hopefully tomorrow I am stronger than today... xox..LINDA
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January 14, 2014 at 7:58 PM
This poem is a great pray for the day to come, when one first wakes up in the morning, great job and thanks for comment on my work as well. cheri
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