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Lonely

I thought we had found it; that elusive 'it', but I glimpse and it is gone again. Held for an instant then lost, slipping from my grasp then tumbling into memory's abyss. Back to harsh reality; garish, abrasive, sore, insensitive; a distant vision of a tender kiss. As you return to your selfishness I am alone again; made lonely in the emptiness of longing. Belonging yet separate somehow. Some things never change so perhaps we shouldn't try? Perhaps the tenderness and love I seek, will be saved for our 'goodbye'?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/21/2010 12:08:00 AM
I know what this feels like, i wouldn't wish it upon even my worst of enemies... I hope that this is not a permanent state of being. The right guy is out there. Please don't give up hope. sincerely, -Charles-
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Date: 6/20/2010 3:14:00 AM
Isolation exists in isolation. Share it and it will evaporate, Helen
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Date: 6/20/2010 2:08:00 AM
I can totally feel the emotion...and my heart is longing...great poem...^_^ v...
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Date: 6/20/2010 2:08:00 AM
Hi Helen, I think loneliness inside of a relationship can be worse than being alone. Your thoughts & emotions are conveyed well. Sad but beautifully written ~ Sharon :)
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