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Lonely

My Mother, like many saints, is compassionate, Though lion-like, my father is considerate; Like banyan tree, my family is well-branched out, Grandmas, Grandpa, Uncles, Aunts - all are good; no doubt... Precious among all, Pink Pearl, I am so lonely, Cause - though ponder and wonder - I don't know wholly. My talks are mad monologues; songs senile solo; I'm my partner to my duet with heart hollow; I'm a plant getting sun and water with no care, In friendly fondling freedom folklores, I've no share; I feel human beings, here, is mortal Islands, Hearts heartlessly hard; minds murked; life barren dry lands... I'm slow, soft, somber; savorless; no glory glow, Deep down in me, like the Zambezi, whirlpools blow; I look at the sun, moon, stars; not relishing them, My mind mocks and knocks and cracks in a moody hem; Seas surreptitious; ships succumbing surmise, shake, My existence seems like someone's sad mad mistake... Stories secrete; poetries pour; in my lone tour, Losing, longing, languishing leads - love's lustrous lore; Quill leaks; notepad nostalgic; words wildly wide, Haunted heart - highest hopping horse- rugs rue rough ride; Love lone, though looks lost, has its marvelous turning, Lamenting lonely life lures cheery churning... 15 September 2021 ''L'' Contest New or Old Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 9/22/2021 10:02:00 AM
Christuraj, congratulations on your win in my L contest with your wonderful poem, splendid writing~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 10/12/2021 10:00:00 AM
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Date: 9/21/2021 10:19:00 AM
This poem is wonderfully constructed with powerful images and haunting alliteration Chris. There is so much to ponder in every line! Congratulations on your win! Blessings for you! I love the second stanza - "I'm my partner to my duet."
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Date: 10/12/2021 9:59:00 AM
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Date: 9/18/2021 11:37:00 PM
I think you like to use alliteration much in your poem and that is GOOD... A deep sad write well penned Chris... Congrats on your win... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/19/2021 1:08:00 AM
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Date: 9/17/2021 3:14:00 PM
Congrats Chris, I admire your verses and truthfulness. Quite outstanding you are. A Fav for me. Panagiota
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Date: 9/19/2021 1:07:00 AM
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Date: 9/17/2021 2:01:00 AM
Awesome use of alliteration and great rhyme in your detailed poem, Christuraj, congratulations:)
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Date: 9/17/2021 4:11:00 AM
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Date: 9/16/2021 4:56:00 PM
Lots of marvelous description and alliteration here. Big congrats, Chris.
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Date: 9/16/2021 9:46:00 PM
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Date: 9/16/2021 4:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Chris! Wonderfully constructed with alliteration that carries the flow of your impactul images and well spoken words! Blessings!
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Date: 9/16/2021 9:46:00 PM
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Date: 9/16/2021 2:19:00 PM
A fantastic read Christuraj, flows and rhymes well. I do hope the poem is fiction not fact, that’s what good poetry does, keeps the reader guessing. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Date: 9/16/2021 9:45:00 PM
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Date: 9/16/2021 11:12:00 AM
Congratulations!!!
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Date: 9/16/2021 9:45:00 PM
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Date: 9/15/2021 8:53:00 AM
Well done. You're so poetic!!! I can picture you standing and reciting your poem with such deep emotions pouring out....
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Date: 9/15/2021 9:05:00 AM
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