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Lonely

All the caravans of hope Have departed from my life's desert It's just me standing alone In search of the way to a destination unknown.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/21/2008 3:54:00 AM
very cool... keep writing...amazing stuff :)
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Date: 11/20/2008 6:52:00 PM
yeah, that comment is very true. Thank god for poetry and its wonderful outlet of words it gives us.
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Date: 11/14/2008 3:04:00 AM
Oh you aren't standing alone, the holy Lord is with you and he'll be with you forever. Though we are alone yet very content at heart. Painful yet realistic. Welcome to the soup and thanks for your sweet words. Love, Chitra
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Date: 11/12/2008 10:06:00 AM
Beautiful as well.
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Date: 11/8/2008 10:45:00 PM
Lovely! Good imagery. Life's true journey begins when one realises that the journey is to be taken alone!
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