Lonely

All the caravans of hope
Have departed from my life's desert
It's just me standing alone
In search of the way to a destination unknown.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Ahmad Avatar
November 21, 2008 at 3:54 AM
very cool... keep writing...amazing stuff :)
Burton Avatar
November 20, 2008 at 6:52 PM
yeah, that comment is very true. Thank god for poetry and its wonderful outlet of words it gives us.
Lakhera Avatar
November 14, 2008 at 3:04 AM
Oh you aren't standing alone, the holy Lord is with you and he'll be with you forever. Though we are alone yet very content at heart. Painful yet realistic. Welcome to the soup and thanks for your sweet words. Love, Chitra
Scott Avatar
November 12, 2008 at 10:06 AM
Beautiful as well.
Misra Avatar
November 8, 2008 at 10:45 PM
Lovely! Good imagery. Life's true journey begins when one realises that the journey is to be taken alone!
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