Notes About The Poem

"Loneliness is human poverty—
yet it breeds dissent like wolves in bone."

- Poet

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Loneliness Rives the Lungs

There is a forest in my chest—
It grows no trees, only space
where willows once stood.
Where light rives in but answers nothing
Illuminates only the certainty of Eclipse—

Creatures born of Lack—
drift-ice flecks of snow
that fell inward and refused to thaw
They pace in slippers threadbare
unbearable—breeding Hunger into Dissent
like wolf-teeth gnawing Bone.

They are the sounds Lack makes
when Loneliness grows lungs
feral for the breath
I still must spend—

One day I’ll wrench them
into Riven Breath of Sky—
cavernous, storm-wrought
yet clawing still—

They’ll rasp the Void
like blades through Snow
my chest a Hive of emptied Bone—

And I
remain the Forest without Trees
oozing riven Light
that answers Nothing
being inscribed in snow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Hamilton Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 9:06 AM
so good to read your words Daniel but also sad hope you are ok hugs Shadow
Hind Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 4:57 PM
This has so much depth and experience, I might add. Amazing work, Daniel
Rodgers Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 9:05 AM
Dear Paige, how I love always reading your comments and poems. Thank you my friend. Autumn Blessings, Dear Paige, Daniel
George Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 4:14 AM
A different way of seeing loneliness through images varied. The image of the forest without trees is so telling. Loneliness crushes one's mind and plunges him into a kind of despondency and melancholy. The feral wolves suggest how loneliness lacerates one's mind, causing intense bleeding. Flecks of snow falling inward suggests one's frozen inner scape. A very powerful poem as ever. Sending you love, dear Daniel.
Rodgers Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 9:05 AM
Dear Valsa, you are always my deep-hearted responder, and I very much appreciate it. Loneliness, if left to its own demise, turns into a treeless forest. Autumn Blessings, Dear Valsa, Daniel
Buhagiar Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 5:48 AM
A deep and profound poem worthy of reflection. Your poetry is always high on my list.
Rodgers Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 9:00 AM
Hello Victor, you are always high on my list and love reading your poetry and comments. Thank You! Autumn Blessings, Victor, Daniel
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November 23, 2025 at 8:29 AM
Wow awesome metaphoric comparison of lungs and trees to express great muse. Kudos!! ????°°?>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<< Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
Rodgers Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 8:59 AM
Hello Zaynab, I am delighted to make a new friend and thank you. I will definitely go read your poems. Autumn Blessings, Zaynab, Daniel
Kauffman Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 12:00 PM
Dear Daniel, how powerfully and profoundly you create the barren, cold world of loneliness - "storm wrought" and "cavernous." Indeed loneliness paces like a hungry wolf that never sees dawn. Thank you for this amazing poem. Sending you warm blessings and best wishes for Thanksgiving, dear friend!
Rodgers Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 8:58 AM
Dear Sam, perhaps everyone experiences some degree of loneliness. But sometimes it can be striking and depressing for some individuals. Thank you, my friend, Autumn Blessings, Dear Sam, Daniel
Goldsmith Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 8:20 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story. What a great picture and quote you have here. Have a Blessed day/weekend writing away............
Rodgers Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 8:56 AM
Hello Paula, you are always one of my favorites. Autumn Blessings, Dear Paula, Daniel
Narain Avatar
November 20, 2025 at 10:54 AM
Great poem
Rodgers Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 8:55 AM
Hello Jay, Thank you so much my friend. Autumn Blessings, Jay, Daniel
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